How do you like my prologue?

Excellent, I think that it's fantastic. Very well written. The only thing (and I know that you're going to hate me for saying this) is that it sounds a bit like Twilight's prologue. I totally have no problem with it, as your is written about 500 times better, but I'm sure that others will judge you for that. Just giving you a heads up. But keep it, it's still fantastic.